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Into the garden on a sunny day
Little Alice went out to play
There she saw a rabbit so white
"I'm late! I'm late!" It shouts in fright
Alice ran and ran but fell into a hole
She fell down but saw not a single soul
Instead she found herself in a room
The doors in it were locked, was this her doom?
But little Alice found a way out
"Is there anyone?" Her shout
Echoes through the strange place
With a strange smirking cat which leaves no trace
Card soldiers which fear to be dead
A queen that shouts "Off with the head!"
With flamingos you play cricket
Oh please let's don't play piquet
But Alice, you should wake up from your dreams!
This isn't real, this is not as it seems!
And when Alice wakes up, she's back 
And with this the story end with a fade to black



This is a request of :iconladymoon1: and she requested me to write about Alice in Wonderland so yeah... I hope you like it
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:iconkisala10:
kisala10 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww voll guuuut!!! *-*
Ach Alice im Wunderland.... Schöner Film <3
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:iconmoon-cha:
Moon-cha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ja stimm ich zu~
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:iconkisala10:
kisala10 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hihi..
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DarkRunever Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
i miss the story really much <333
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:iconmoon-cha:
Moon-cha Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww hehe :D
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:iconthe3rdsaruwatari:
the3rdsaruwatari Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
:iconclapplz: This.. Tis is very creative.. and fun to read.. Gonna read it to my children once I have one~ :iconimhappyplz:
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:iconmoon-cha:
Moon-cha Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol really? XD
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:iconthe3rdsaruwatari:
the3rdsaruwatari Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Yeah!!~~ The poem is shoooooooooo.. just shoo-- :iconifaintplz:
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:iconmoon-cha:
Moon-cha Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So?
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:iconthe3rdsaruwatari:
the3rdsaruwatari Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
I can't find a word to match the awesomeness.. Hehe sorry?~ :icontinoplz:
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